Feedback

We showed our first draft of the film opening to the target audience today on a piece of paper they fed back to us what they liked about our opening and also some questions about areas they werent sure on.

We wrote down all the positives from the feedback, and then wrote down what things we need to work on or justify.

Positives:
Production Title
Music
Dog-Whining
Lighting
Good ending
Graffiti
POV camera shot
Camera shots in general
Location
Raindrop on the camera-good effect
Eyes at the end

Negatives/questions:
Why a guy actor?
Why was there smoke at the end?
Did he mean to trip?
Why cant you hear the calling of the dog?
Could you include more titles?
The camera is a bit jolty
Watermarks on the camera